Hmmmm Should I??

Hmmmm Should I?? ????

Posted 08 May 2012 - 07:21 PM (#21) Fatema-the-resplendent

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Very nice, a good message for the young in a style that is more effective than difficult poems.

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Posted 08 May 2012 - 09:39 PM (#22) Sister.T

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Fatema-the-resplendent, on 08 May 2012 - 07:21 PM, said:

Very nice, a good message for the young in a style that is more effective than difficult poems.

JazakAllah sister Fatima. I just want to get a message out. The is just the start as in the first one I wrote so it's not as thought provoking I have more deeper ones this is just a general one.

Posted 09 May 2012 - 10:07 PM (#23) checkmate

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Salaam

Masha'Allah sis T..very very good. I like how you have brought different issues in to the mix. Keep up the hard work, because I know finding the right words can be very difficult. Its a good skill. I would like to collaborate and write one together.

Masalaam

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Posted 09 May 2012 - 10:20 PM (#24) Sister.T

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checkmate, on 09 May 2012 - 10:07 PM, said:

Wow did u really like it? JazakAllah

and well thats how I flow lol but do u rap too?

Posted 09 May 2012 - 10:27 PM (#25) checkmate

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It's good to see someone bring up issues that us apologetic muslims are too scared to bring up. So well done and big up for that. I wouldnt say I can rap, but I am interested in writing and would like to get a piece down together.

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Posted 09 May 2012 - 10:38 PM (#26) Sister.T

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checkmate, on 09 May 2012 - 10:27 PM, said:

I just want the youth to realise what is going on in the world around them as most of the Muslim youth are stuck in their own world and aren't aware of the outside real world called reality! So it's a message to get across to them reall and oh that's good you should put pen to paper and speak your mind

cause what you write is from your heart and is positive if your trying to give a clear message I'll send you some of my other lyrics but they're kinda deep also where are you from?